各位学霸们好，今天黄老师为大家带来2021年03月27号雅思大作文真题范文和解析。
上周考题如下：（版本1）
Some believe making a lot of money is success. Do you agree or disagree?
注：该题的另一个版本2为:
Some believe making a lot of money is success while others think making contribution to society is success. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
黄老师这里用的版本1作为范文，该题讨论的是金钱与成功的关系，观点和词汇都较难构思，范文都是由黄老师从大量英文期刊杂志中摘抄的好词好句编写而成，同学们可以熟记黄老师的范文中词汇，再碰到类似的哲学类题目时，你也能写出一样的地道搭配！
该题目满分词汇如下：（同学们可以自测一下：有哪些是自己会用的呢）
financial freedom n. 财富自由
justifiable adj. 合理的
milestone n. 里程碑
virtuous circle n. 良性循环（恶性循环vicious circle）
signify n. 表示
At the other end of the spectrum 另一方面（替代on the other hand）
monetary adj. 金钱的
contentment n. 满足感
competence n. 才干
mutually exclusive 互相排斥
sideshow n. 余兴节目
materialism n. 物质主义
fortune n. 财富
spiritual needs n. 精神需求
dispensable adj. 可有可无的
支持段：
Success is usually associated with a great degree of financial freedom, which is justifiable as wealth enhances people’s economic motivation, or their drive to work and improve their standard of living. Furthermore, money can be a tool to motivate one to achieve major milestones in life, creating a virtuous circle which signifies success in the long run.
反驳段：
At the other end of the spectrum, it is also justifiable to regard success as achieving high target by doing what one is passionate about regardless of its monetary value. In other words, successful people are also more productive and satisfied with their ideal jobs, thus creating positive feelings of self-worth, pride and contentment. Such sense of competence is, without doubt, a key indicator of achievement.
中和段：
However, money and other factors indicating success are not mutually exclusive in most circumstances: people who make more money also tend to be more successful at what they do and sense a higher degree of competence. Whether money is a mere sideshow of real success all comes down to the way one views wealth and materialism. For some with materialistic pursuits, making a fortune is indeed success, while for others with spiritual needs, money could be deemed to be dispensable.
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