各位学霸们好,今天黄老师继续为大家带来本周(2021.9.11)雅思大作文真题范文。本周考题如下:
2021.9.11真题
The natural resources such as oil, forests and freshwater are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does this cause? How can we solve these problems?
这道题算是一道经典report类老题了。同学们在写作之前需要注意以下几点:
1.这道题并未问到原因,所以千万不要写为什么资源正在耗尽!
2.report类型的题目一律不要出现个人立场(e.g. 我同意题目的看法)
3.因为题目的问题有复数,所以问题和解决方案最好各写2个点
4.尽量避免使用低级词汇(e.g. less and less / dangerous等)
本文可用高级词汇如下:
overexploitation n. 过渡开发
degradation n. 降解(变坏)
Practice n. 经常从事的活动
marine adj. 海洋的
suppress v. 抑制
halt v. 停滞
take a toll 造成损失(固定搭配)
In the worst-case scenario 在最坏的情况下
root out v. 铲除
initiatives n. 提案
depletion n. 耗尽枯竭
enact v. 实施
renewables n. 可持续能源
utilize v. 效用
那么,同学们带着这些词汇,来看看黄老师的范文吧!(范文由黄老师参考网上英文期刊资料整理写出,均为地道语句可以直接背诵)
2021.9.11真题
The natural resources such as oil, forests and freshwater are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does this cause? How can we solve these problems?
问题段1:
Due to the changes in the living conditions of animals as a result of resource overexploitation and habitat degradation, some species may become extinct. For instance, forested regions are known to be a habitat for a sheer number of animal species whereas deforestation is progressively destroying forest habitats. Practices such as overfishing have similarly led to a drastic reduction in the number of marine species.
问题段2:
Shortage of resources will suppress economic activities and whatever industries are based on it will suffer. Which of the resources are in shortage will halt the concerning industry production process and slowly rising costs will take a toll.(In the worst-case scenario, only big corporations with good supply sources will survive and they will root out smaller concerns and establish a monopoly. 最后一句话可以不写)
解决段1:
There should be more initiatives by local and global organizations for checking against resource depletion, which may also act as incentives for encouraging the general public to conserve natural resources. Furthermore, sustainability programs that aim to educate people about the importance of conserving natural resources should also be enacted as a way of focusing on the long-term risks associated with environmental degradation.
解决段2:
Globally, renewables such as solar and wind power can be explored more and utilized to reduce the dependency on fossil fuel, which is a major cause of environmental pollution, climate change, global warming, and destruction of natural habitats. Individually, we can conserve some of the electricity simply by turning things off and unplugging them when we are not using them and by using more energy-efficient appliances.
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