【雅培PTE讲堂】本周大作文真题 – 气候变暖-满分思路&范文

【雅培PTE讲堂】本周大作文真题 - 气候变暖-满分思路&范文

各位学霸们好，今天黄老师给大家带来PTE本周考到的大作文Essay真题解析，题目如下：

You need to study climate change; which area would you choose and why did you choose it?

题目构思

对于这道题，在构思阶段需要注意的点如下：

1. climate change指的是气候变化，所以同学们选择的一定是气候变化的领域，最常见的❎错误答案如pollution之类的属于气候变化的原因，但是并不是气候变化本身！

2. 稳妥起见同学们可以统一选择global warming来写，这个点特别好展开和写出高端词汇搭配（对的，大作文是PTE唯一需要高端词汇的题目）。

文章结构分析/亮点词汇

在构思完毕以后，文章结构我们需要注意的点如下：

1.需要在开头和结尾段明确的提出，我需要研究的领域为global warming（替代模板中结论句）。

2.中间段两段写的为为什么选择global warming，也就是其造成的影响严重性。可以第一段写其生态影响，第二段写经济影响。（两段的话题错开，避免词汇重复）

那么，接下来这篇文章可以用到的部分79分词汇搭配如下：（同学们一定记住，PTE大作文不要单个记某个词，一定要记忆搭配！！！）

–the most pressing ecological crisis 最紧迫的生态浩劫

–loss of bio-diversity 生物多样性的消逝

–at an alarming rate 以一个令人警惕的速率

–irreversible in the foreseeable future 在可以预见的未来是不可逆转的

–coexist with 和…共存

最后，我们来看看文章范文吧：

满分范文

* 范文没有套模板，同学们可以背诵其思路和词汇，然后套入模板句中，但是一定要注意：不要选无脑填词模板！不要选无脑填词模板！不要选无脑填词模板！

16. You need to study climate change; which area would you choose and why did you choose it?

* 首先陈述：Within the scope of climate change, it is global warming that arouses my interest the most.

* 该题也可以套入其他类似话题，比如政府面临的最严重的问题是什么

论点1：Global warming is the most pressing ecological crisis that all humanity are facing in the recent decades.

展开2: Compared with most of other recent global issues, which exerts their impacts merely regionally and can be addressed to some extent, the loss of bio-diversity resulted from continuing global temperature rising is at an alarming rate that it will be irreversible in the foreseeable future if we choose to neglect it anymore.

论点2：Despite its environmental impacts, global warming has posed greater threat to our economy than ever before.

展开2：Although it has not been implemented worldwide, many nations in the globe is already sacrificing its short-term economic development in exchange for flattering the curve for greenhouse gas emission – the primary cause of global warming, and it will be of great use to conduct an investigation into how modern economy can coexist with global warming.

秒懂逻辑：全球性影响 + 经济影响【一边倒】

【雅培PTE讲堂】本周大作文真题 - 气候变暖-满分思路&范文